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What Are YOU Writing?

What are you writing

What are you working on right now?

A novel? Your best article ever? A poem? A film script?

Maybe you’ve just finished something you’re really proud of? Or you just can’t tell whether it should get a Pulitzer or be thrown into the trash?

Here’s your chance to share and discuss with each other what you are writing about.

Whet our appetite with the opening paragraph of your future bestseller or give us a link to your best article. Tell us: what are you writing at the moment?

Who knows, your piece might even attract the notice of a major publishing house!

Here are some guidelines:

 

Writers:

 

State what aspect you’re working on. For example, you might want to say, “Here’s a link to my article “Whatever.” I’m currently working on eliminating superfluous words.”

 

Commenters:

 

* When commenting, first list everything you really like about a piece.
* Only then offer careful suggestions.
* Treat each other with respect, friendliness, caring, and honesty.
* Remember that we are all still learning.

 

Now it’s over to you. Take a deep breath. Then jump into the comment section and bring out your treasures!

 

About the author: 

Mary Jaksch is Editor-in-Chief at Write to Done. Grab her FREE report How to Write Like an A-List Blogger. Mary has helped thousands of students successfully create outstanding and profitable blogs at  A-List Blogging and is the blogger behind Goodlife ZEN.

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87 thoughts on “What Are YOU Writing?”

  • Amal says:

    Hi there Mary,
    I really loved your idea. Brilliant I’d say :)

    I’m a Journalism student and every year, at least one short film is being rolled out from our college. And this year, I want to do one too.
    It should be a max 20 minutes film and I’m completely blank. I’m carrying a pen and book for the last one week and I’vent got anything yet.

    I’m trying to write a story with something teenagers can relate to and which shoots a relevant message.
    I’m loving this tension.

    Can’t wait to see what others are writing.

    Cheers!
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  • Just finished my first novel. It’s erotica ;).

    Find the preview at http://feedyoursoul.com/wp-content/uploads/2014/07/ftll-preview.pdf and the full deets at http://www.feedyoursoul.com/fishtails.

  • Today I’m writing social media notices and blog updates because this morning the first book I’m publishing went live.

    http://www.amazon.com/Trash-To-Treasure-Douglas-Clarke/dp/1634270037

    Monday it will be on to book two, where I need to write the Introduction to for the book and the afterword for my story.

  • Nicky says:

    This is the first para from my historical novel, set in the 12thC. I’m working on the basics – showing not telling!
    Wimer inched forwards on his tummy a bit more, careful not to get his shadow over the fat black tadpole he was watching. It was doing a most peculiar wriggle-flip thing, making it change direction in very unexpected ways – was it just about to grow legs, he wondered? Or was it a tadpole genius, never to be eaten by a hungry fish? He lost it behind a school of lesser tadpoles, and leant in just a bit more. There it went, jinking around a frond of weed. How on earth did it do that? He pulled his knees and feet together to make a tail and… OH! Ooops… He hauled himself out of the stream. His tunic was so heavy with water that the hem was almost at his knees. Mother was going to kill him!

  • Hi everybody, at the moment I am writing a true story, ‘LET HIM HANG’, about a young Liverpool lad who came to New Zealand looking for a better life in the early 1950s. Two years later, because of an accident in a milkbar at lunchtime in busy Queen Street, Auckland, NZ, Fred was hanged. At the time, New Zealand was a repressed, conservative country led by a National government. Due to a massive culture phenomenon washing in from the United States – movies (like ‘The Wild One’ with Marlon Brando) and actors, communism, American music and pulp fiction, fashion, milkbars and milkbar cowboys and leather jackets – the government had to be seen to be doing something to stop their wanton teenagers. Their answer was to use Fred as a scapegoat and hang him on the Meccano Set (a moveable gallows). In that year alone, 1955, four men met their death by the rope.

    You can find me on my website: http://www.kerinfreeman.webs.com

  • Diane Turner says:

    First paragraph of romantic fiction WIP, set in the 1990s. I’m always working on craft, showing, and trying to find the time to write.\

    Mark’s landky stride picked up as he closed the few blocks to Penn Station. With practiced precision, he stripped off his tie and stuffed it in his jacket pocket, then loosened the top two buttons of his white shirt. As the train shuddered forward, the city released his shoulders and its hold on him. The rhythmic clatter of the rails and the warm afternoon lulled him, and he leaned back, folding his body into the cracked leather seat, and dozed. As the train shlowed for the downhill into Pelham, he roused and, through the smudged windows, watched the rural New York countryside through half-open eyes. Red brick cottages strewn on acres of rolling hills thick with elms and reedy grasses, the grit and noise of Manhattan left behind. The city was clamor, Pelham was peace, where Ellie and Sam awaited him. A poor hillbilly schlub from West Virginia, who, by some off quirk of fate, now had all this. Good day at the office. The Scanlon case had settled. Nothing could mar this idyllic life, a life close to perfect.

    • First thing I notice is that you misspelled lanky. Also, there are several tun-on sentences. In my humble opinion, several short and concise sentences read better than one lengthy one that goes on and on. Also, I think you could start another paragraph at “Red brick cottages…” Not trying to criticize. Just trying to help.

      • Diane Turner says:

        Thank you. Your comments are much appreciated, and you are indeed helping. No excuse for the spelling error, and I will work on the sentences.

    • Hey Diane,

      Sounds awesome – lovely description.

      My first thought, apart from ‘landky’ lol :) (we’ve all done it!) is…. there are too many ‘the’s. I’m a bit sensitive because I’m guilty of this all the time :)

      Hope that helps,
      Eliza.

    • Writing the first paragraph of a novel is alway a big task. That’s why some writers put this task right a the end, when the novel is more-or-less complete.

      The main thing is that you are writing and that you have a goal, Diane. Most people never have an idea for a novel, and then they don’t have the gumption to set out writing it.
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      • Diane Turner says:

        Thank you. Writing a first paragraph later is a good idea. I have the story skeleton mapped out on a storyboard and will be adding meat to its bones. Onward.

  • My net was down for a month. The good thing is that it caused me to reevaluate some of the things I’m working on. This blog post is a) an excerpt from a book I’m writing and b) is a change from my usual method. This time I’m asking for feedback? About any aspect of it. Please tell me what you think.
    http://theauthorspage.blogspot.com/2014/08/do-you-need-mentor.html

  • Brad says:

    As a Christian writer I have always been fascinated and intrigued with the subject of “Free Will” given to mankind by God. I have a blog for which I write prolifically on and just completed what I consider one of my best insight articles on free will titled; “Free Will – Power Over Choice” at: http://injesussteps.com/?p=676.
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  • Today I made some minor corrections (corrected version still hasn’t gone live) to the description of my novella, a zombie spoof, released on Amazon 7/22/24. This is like the fifth time I’ve changed the description. For some reason it never sounds as good after I hit submit.

    http://amzn.com/B00M1BZVAK

    Thank you Mary for such a welcome idea.
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  • I’m currently writing a review of a wonderful exhibition of ceramic art. Just getting to the editing stage now. Here’s a link to my (new- not much on there yet) website for similar reviews. http://www.caterinaleone.com
    Caterina Leone recently posted..Review of 12.06.14 at Home@735 GalleryMy Profile

  • Here’s a link to my latest article “No matter how creative, ingenious or inventive you are, if you don’t persevere, you might as well not have any talent,” (http://www.cheer-ebooks.com/blog/). I wrote it to help motivate those of us out there who need a little push to keep pursuing our creative dreams! Would love feedback or comments of camaraderie!

  • Zara Chapman says:

    Hey, guys, so I have a website called ZaraWrites: http://zarawrites.yolasite.com/ And it would be amazing for new subscribers. I also have a blog under the same name, which you will find on the website. I have one book published, and if you want information on the book, or what I have planned, then you can go onto the site and contact me there :) Would be great to hear from anyone, and would be great to get some subscribers. I know I’m only 17, but writing is my life, and if I could become a bigger author, then that would be amazing :)

  • Don Falloon says:

    Greetings, all! Some good reads here!

    Okay, onto the opening paragraph of my current novel in progress…

    The access to Old Mill Road was unmarked and nearly invisible at night, but I could find it with my eyes closed. I slowed my motorcycle and turned off the main highway, quickly dropping my speed to nearly a crawl. I flipped on my high beam to better navigate the rutted roadway, weaving to follow the few thin trails of reasonably smooth asphalt spidering between potholes and craters that were more a relief map of the moon than simple flaws in the worn road.

    … and should anyone be curious, I would be happy to share my current pitch for my novel.

  • L.A.A.L.aw says:

    Dear Ms. Jaksch:

    Thank you so much for writing The (nearly) Ultimate Guide to Better Writing it is quite helpful. I am currently working on a re-write to a synopsis of a series of books my family released in hopes readers will contribute to various charities or allow us to if they enjoy the story. Our story regarding this series is posted on various sites with the books and this is one of the synopsis we keep re-writing to get people interested.
    Experience a mystical mystery surrounding an isolated institution run by a family of physicians while escaping into a world of not only warring angels, demons and vampires, but one’s own self-doubts and fears. While sifting through hidden clues and double meanings to decipher who is the enemy and discover the key to freeing the entrapped souls which otherwise will separate the two lovers for all eternity, the reader experiences how Mia and Andrew’s own self-doubt is an unrealized enemy, leading them in circles which each must fight to break free from before their love perishes in its wake.

  • This is the opening paragraph to my novella that falls more under the dystopian label than not; I’ve written a few articles about it on my blog if you’re interested! I’m very pleased with the diverse cast, the main character isn’t white (instead Middle Eastern) there’s a homosexual, bisexual, male to female transgender, cross dresser, and asexual in it, as well as someone who is Mexican. Plus some of the characters are both not white and not straight, which is something very rare in literature! So here’s the opening paragraph.

    Bright lights hit the filthy figure striding onstage with fists jabbing the air to greet everyone, head high and dark brown eyes gleaming. A cocky smirk with yellow teeth lit up the nineteen-year-old’s face at the applause, his whooping and jumping followers filling the moonlit beach. Eyes flitting about-good a large crowd, lots of vermin-he took a deep breath, head tossed back as The Abandoned Child stabbed his fist into the crisp night air. “Fuck! The! Father!”

    It might induce slight confusion with the titles, but that’s cleared up in the next paragraph and they only asked for the first one.

    ~Jessica
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  • At this moment I am entrenched in writing Book Two of The Brede Chronicles. I think I have a good premise and plot though I am a bit concerned about the opening–debating to re-write it or to keep it because I believe in it…and I believed in Book One when others didn’t & it got picked up and published within four months. I should trust my own instinct I think.
    Patti
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  • Hi Guys,

    This is a great idea Mary!

    Below is a link to a post I wrote last week for the Why I Write Blog Hop. I used the article to play around a bit with my writing :) It’s not something I normally write about on the blog, and I know that, I’m just interested in any constructive criticism anyone can offer.

    http://www.elizaellis.blogspot.com.au/2014/07/the-why-i-write-blog-hop.html

    Hope you enjoy the read!

    All the best,

    Eliza.
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  • Eric says:

    Hi, my name is Eric and I’m currently revising a novel. I’d written it recently in third person and now I’m going through to rewrite it in first person and play with the timeline a little bit. Here’s the opening:

    “Lose one friend, lose all friends, lose yourself.”
    August 2nd, 2014:
    Two days until Tommy’s birthday and I don’t even know if I’m gonna show. Tommy’s off with his sister right now, celebrating her 21st like I should be. If someone had asked me two years ago where I was gonna be when my best friend’s kid sister hit 21 I know exactly what I would have said: I’m gonna be out there laughing at the poor souls trying to drink in peace as the three of us tear apart every bar in an eighty mile radius. Now I don’t even know where they’d decided to go, or when we were gonna see each other again. Hell, now I don’t even know if we’re gonna see each other again. I try to phrase all of this in a way that Michelle will understand.
    “I just wanna know where I’m going, when I’m going, and who’s going with me. That shouldn’t be a difficult question. I should have friends. Why don’t I have friends?”
    “Damn it Ryan, where are you,” she asks me, again. Why do people repeat questions? If I was going to answer it I would have already.
    “I just wanna know-”
    “Fine, fine. Just keep talking. Tell me everything, okay? Everything.”

  • Hi Mary – this is the opening paragraph for my mainstream novel, Pennies from Burger Heaven. I had literary representation, but my agent left the biz this fall before we submitted my book for publication. I WANT ANOTHER AGENT!

    “Me and Mama live here at the cemetery, by the Warrior Angel statue. It’s our home. He always stands high on those four pedestals, with his dark wings stretched wide, holding that stone sword in his left hand, while his right stays out toward Burger Heaven. Asking God for help. Who know angels were beggars like me?”
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  • Currently writing a Blog about Batman called BATFAN on BATMAN, in between packing everything to move out, my other projects are on hold until after the move. Here’s a post I wrote this week “My first Batman” http://numberonebatfan.wordpress.com/2014/08/02/my-first-batman/

    Any constructive critical feedback etc is appreciated.
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  • Hi,

    Understand I don’t consider myself a writer in the classic sense.

    Sometime after my stroke I wrote about the incident. This did help with my
    healing process. My next is to update and bring that little note current.

    I wanted to encourage others to put down their thoughts about life’s challenges,
    even if only for their own satisfaction (a diarry?).

    I hope to do that with my website – which is new so not much there. Have
    not even decided what theme to finally use so it is a ‘work-in-progress’.

    Bob
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  • I’m translating my children’s anthology “The Seer’s Stone” into Spanish, and finding it very hard going. It’s so much easier to translate into your native language. Fortunately I have a friend who’s polishing it for me.

    The book contains a dozen stories, closely tied to the history and legends of La Palma in the Canary Islands. The mysterious seer’s stone is a unifying thread for the stories, which cover events from 1493 to a little past the present day. Since I’m a fantasy and science fiction writer, I include things like dragons, time travel, space ships, and visiting aliens. And lots of starry skies, because I love La Palma’s starry sky.
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  • Vanitha says:

    Hi, I have begun writing a book about my journey as a breast cancer survivor. My objective is to uplift, entertain, motivate and educate people while describing my journey. I tend to use long sentences and am also guilty of using too many superfluous words. I would greatly appreciate any feedback and criticism. Thank you.

    Nice Try Cancer! But I’m still here!
    I learnt that I am an optimist, always have been. Every project I undertake, I expect to see to a successful conclusion. When events take a turn for the worse, I imagine how they will get better. My general attitude is that things will work out, even though – needless to say – sometimes they don’t. But optimists like myself, get back up, brush themselves off, and learn lessons from these life experiences (and don’t look at them as mistakes – but rather valuable learning opportunities), and look for every opportunity to share our learning.
    So, I decided to put my fears aside about having cancer and finally do something about it. I’m not going to be selfish anymore. I’m going to take action and start helping more people. We all walk around carrying mental images of what the world is like and how the future will unfold. Some see the glass as half full. Others do not. There is a huge payoff in seeing gray skies as just passing clouds. Optimists expect to have meaningful relationships, good health and happy, productive lives. They live longer and worry less. They avoid needless anxiety and adjust better to stress.

    Optimism is a source of vitality and hope, courage and confidence. It motivates us to set goals, to take risks. It encourages persistence in the face of obstacles.
    “There is no danger of developing eyestrain from looking on the bright side of things.” – Author Unknown
    My goal is to help people see the endless possibilities of living and learning…

    Chapter 1

    There is no better feeling than having the warm, golden autumn sun envelop you in its comforting embrace, especially when the air is bone-chilling in the shade. Regardless of how low the temperature has dipped, once you venture out of the shade and into the sun, you feel the soft, warm marshmallow feeling ensconce you. So far, Johannesburg is the only place on earth that I have experienced this. Now Johannesburg is many things but not a place you would call a sleepy hollow. It is a city of many wonders. Not all are wonderful. It is a buzz of incessant energy as cars, buses and taxis over-run the crowded streets. Taxi drivers and motorists are constantly vying for their piece of the tarred road, often engaging in sign language that leaves nothing to the imagination. To add to the melee of activity, pedestrians catapult into the street, without a single glance or thought of the zebra-crossing, specifically marked for their safe walk across. The angst that you feel as a driver in Johannesburg is so mundane that, if by chance every single driver suddenly slowed down to the speed limit, or if the pedestrians used the zebra-crossing, I fear that we may all be trapped in a traffic jam forever, just from the sheer shock of it!
    I love Johannesburg! I especially love it when a taxi driver is courteous enough to stop and let you into the flow of vehicles. Granted, this certainly doesn’t happen every day, but when it does, you celebrate with a little mental dance! I love the excitement and sense of danger that wells up in the pit of your stomach as you get to the traffic lights, with your windows done. What can I expect today? Will some little reprobate teen, dart across the road and make a lunge for my cellphone or my half-eaten packet of crisps? Or will the tenth blind beggar I’ve seen on the 1km stretch lumber on over with his sighted-partner for change to be deposited into his sadly clanging tin? Or, will the pamphlet hander-outer , give me a pamphlet that I could actually use, this time? I love Johannesburg and its myriad of characters framed against glass skyscrapers, interspersed with car dealerships and food stalls. A Rainbow Nation for sure but frankly, I don’t believe that it describes the racial groups making Johannesburg their home. I believe that it describes the hues of the characters, personalities and ambitions of this beautiful nation. The barber in his make-shift barber shop at the intersection may exude the same ambition and flair when a new customer appears, as would an investment banker in his Porsche GT3 meeting with a new investor at the News Cafe.
    Feeling a part of the buzzing metropolis can only be meaningful and adventurous if you allow yourself to focus on the journey and to retire all thoughts that threaten to consume your mind. There are no dangerous thoughts, however I definitely believe that thinking itself is dangerous. Using my newly-found skill, not thinking, but being, I absorbed all the sights, smells and smiles of my unhurried drive to my appointment.
    Today, I was expertly persuaded by my General Practitioner to visit the Breast Care Clinic for a routine mammogram. My GP is a strong-willed, highly intelligent South African Indian woman. Indian mothers are bad enough in using their under-handed persuasive skills, now add higher education, life- experience and intelligence, you have no chance! In no uncertain terms, she ordered me to call the Clinic and insist on an appointment today, using her as a reference. Needless to say, the receptionist on the other line, hastened to confirm my appointment in an hour after hearing my GP’s name.

  • Hi Vanitha, thanks for sharing a piece of your work with us.

    It’s wonderful that you’re seeing your experience of cancer as a new opportunity.
    This is like turning straw into gold.

    As to your writing. I would say that you obviously have talent, that’s for sure. And you have heart and passion of a writer.

    I have one really simple tip for you:

    Break up each of your paragraph into *many* short paras!

    Even use one-sentence paragraphs.

    Your readers will thank you because your pieces will be much easier to read.
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    • Vanitha says:

      Hi Mary,

      Thank you so much for your prompt response! I really appreciate your feedback. I

      It definitely makes sense to split into more paragraphs.

      I will definitely work on that.

      Thank you

      Vanitha

  • Mike says:

    Hi Mary and all,

    I am writing a sci-fi fantasy novel, attempting to put into motion the dream I have of writing after I retire– without actually waiting till I retire. I have several rough chapters written with outlines for several more. Here are the first two paragraphs:

    Like the tiniest of embers in an almost forgotten fire, a flicker of consciousness entered the boy’s mind. There was no sense of time or space or self. In these first fragile moments of pre-awareness, existence itself hung in the balance in an unseen battle between life and death. The single beat of a butterfly’s wings could have fanned the flame to life or snuffed it out forever. For reason or reasons beyond our ability to perceive, this time life prevailed. Like the moment when a cell divides and then divides again, life took root; the dimly burning ember took hold; the flicker became a small but steady flame. The darkness backed away and the light of consciousness advanced. As if emboldened by the retreating void of emptiness, the flame grew brighter still, and consciousness gave way to awareness, and awareness to the first fleeting whispers of thought. His diaphragm shuddered and then contracted fully, sucking a rush of air deep into his lungs. He became aware of his own heartbeat and the light filtering through his closed eyelids began to register in his awakening mind. He began to sense his surroundings– the cool ground beneath him and the smell of moist earth in his nostrils. The fingers of his right hand twitched.
    She continued to watch from above– unmoving, barely daring to breathe.

  • Here’s a link to my latest article, “Incorporating Travel Sites into Your Vacation Planning.” I’m currently working on not being too wordy in my articles.
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    • The good news is that you’re an accomplished writer.

      At the same time, there are a couple of things you could think about:

      1, Experiment with “how to” headlines. For example, this post was very practical and it could have benefited from a headline that starts with ‘how to’.

      2. One way to get people to read a complete blog post is to write the intro, using very short paragraphs. Take you intro and see what it looks like when you let the first sentence stand on its own as a paragraph – and then continue with very short paragraphs (this will ease the reader into the post).
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  • One more! I’m also working on my next children’s book “Teddy, the Unready T. Rex,” which my son (12) is illustrating. Here’s the intro:

    “But I don’t want to start dinosaur training school, dad,” said Teddy, a very small Tyrannosaurus Rex, even for his young age. “I’m not ready.”
    “Nonsense,” said his father. “When I was your age, I took on anything that moved. Nothing was too big! Why, I remember one time–”
    “But I’m too short,” broke in Teddy, knowing his father’s stories could go on for ages.
    His father shook his head and brought his jaws together, snapping his tree-trunk toothpick in half.
    “You’ve got to learn dinosaur self defense against Gorgosauruses in case I’m not around. You start tomorrow,” his father said.
    Teddy swung his tail around and thumped angrily out of the cave. “Podokesaurus!” he said. (That’s like saying ‘Rats!’ A Podokesaurus was close to being a rat back then.)
    Teddy was only about as big as a two-door car, which is pretty small for a T. (for Tyrannosaurus) Rex. He was no match against a Gorgosaurus without dinosaur defense school, and these fierce dinosaurs were often tramping through the forest where Teddy lived. Teddy wanted to learn growling and roaring and pouncing and tree splintering and all the other T. Rex tricks. But he didn’t feel ready at all. And the real reason was Big Rex.

    http://www.cheer-ebooks.com/teddy-the-unready-t-rex.html

  • Very nice, Michelle! I especially like the bit: ‘Teddy swung his tail around and thumped angrily out of the cave. “Podokesaurus!” he said.’

    It’s vivid and the little T Rex really comes to life. I would love to see the book when it’s finished …
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  • Last spring, just after I turned 62, I semi-retired and began a camping/traveling adventure across the USA. This blog is a collection of thoughts, learnings and stories I have encountered so far. Here’s one that I kindof like: http://tallwomantraveling.com/2014/06/30/gophers-and-local-newsletters-help-find-a-place-to-dig/

    Really, I am just wondering if my stories are interesting to anyone besides me. And any other comments/feedback would be greatly appreciated.

    Meredith
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    • I”m a test case, Meredith. I don’t know the first thing about the Chadron State Park or archeology digs, but I actually read your post with interest.

      You have a lively way of writing!

      Whether you will have a throng of reader on your site is a difficult question because the blog meanders as you meander through the USA.

      However, think of it this way: your blog is giving you a fantastic way of honing your writing skills. And you may well be able to re-purpose your blog posts as a travel book at a later stage.

      Keep writing!
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  • Deb Palmer says:

    What I love about this article is the heart … encouragement and motivation to those and from those who could really use it.
    My base work is a Christian memoir about two unremarkable people whom God loved, changed and continues to care for. “In Spite of Us,” is written in the often opposing alternating voices of “Us” (my husband and self.
    The blog’s topic is random with the focus on story telling. Soon I will be sharing excerpts from the book.
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  • Emma Hutchinson says:

    Hi,
    I’m Emma, I don’t have a website, but right now I am working on the first draft of a novel and here is the prologue here:

    PROLOGUE

    “They will come for you. And they will stop at nothing to get rid of you, just like they did your mother.” Alex said to me. I at least thought that he might be a little nicer about it. “Wow, thanks man! Just say it straight up, just, your gonna die!” He grinned sheepishly. “Sorry dude, but I’m not gonna sugar coat it for ya.” And that’s Alex. How he turned out to be my best friend? I have absolutely no idea. With his dark brown eyes and jet black hair, he could charm anyone, and almost always got what he wanted. Almost, I say, because he couldn’t fall me. Sure, he can convince anyone anything, but being his best friend I can see straight past all the lies and fake smiles, so he gave up with me, as you may be able to tell. He knows he can’t get what he wants from me so he doesn’t even bother trying. But I think that that’s great.

    He kept on talking, sadly, so I just zoned out as usual. I’m Josh. I’m football quarterback at school and everyone loves me. Kinda. Anyway, with my baby blue eyes, cream skin and blonde hair, how could you not? Well… almost everyone loves me. Not to long ago, I found out that my mum DIDN’T die in her sleep. She was murdered and now the guy who did it is apparently after me. Great right? Note the sarcasm.

    “Were you listening to anything that I’ve just been saying?” Alex demanded rudely. I grinned. “Yeah, of course! I agree, I’m gonna die soon and I need to get a bodyguard or something…” I trailed off. Of course I hadn’t been listening. All he’s been talking about since he found out is that I’m gonna die a horrible death and I have to get out of here straight away without dying or whatnot… “No, I said, are you going to the football game next Saturday?” I groaned and nodded slowly. “Of course! I’m part of the team! I could never miss it!” I could tell that Alex was about to burst into another speech about my safety and why I can’t go to the game (for the seventh time) so I just rolled my eyes and stood up leaving him standing there alone.

    Ugh, I hate that guy sometimes…

    Thanks,
    Emma

  • Emma Hutchinson says:

    I posted the prologue of my story above. It was also a fiction story. I just thought I should let u know and aimed at teens.

    Thanks,
    Emma

  • Allison Fox says:

    This is the first paragraph of my horror story, ‘Him’. I’ve been trying to get it published for almost a year now…. Maybe one day…

    Tick… Tock… Tick… went the clock. My heartbeat was faster than the speed of that second hand. I had been sitting there for several minutes, The Human Resources Representative still hadn’t shown up and my nerves were vibrating with anticipation. The job would be customer service for the local bank. It sounded like I could handle it, talking to people on the phone while handling other small office tasks, I could handle that. Couldn’t I? A dark void deep in my stomach screamed at me, as rain patted lightly upon the window, as if telling me that the accident would haunt me for the rest of my days. It was right. I don’t live a moment without fear or regret stemming from what happened all those years ago. I knew Him! Then He nearly murdered my husband. My hands grasped the arms of my chair until my knuckles were white.

  • Anouk says:

    hi everyone!
    I am writing a book over a brother and a sister who find a secret locker at school that leads to another world :p
    but on the moment I am in a writers Blok so if you have any ideas
    you can e-mail me: anoukicey@gmail.com

  • heyas :-). how are you all?. well i love to write and i rele want to get into creative writing and but i have a hard time coming up with ideas on what to write about and was wondering if you knew how i could get over this “writer’s block”?. . thanks so much!!.

  • pikavippi says:

    What are the most popular blog sites in the Philippines where I can submit my blogs for others to read?

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