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		<title>By: NaNo Tips and Tricks &#171; Girl Meets Word</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-15165</link>
		<dc:creator>NaNo Tips and Tricks &#171; Girl Meets Word</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 07 Nov 2010 13:25:28 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>[...] to Done has a guest post by Marla Beck titled First Draft Secrets: Five Simple Steps. It’s not written for NaNo, but it has some great information regardless of whether you’re [...]</description>
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		<title>By: hermes handbags</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-13746</link>
		<dc:creator>hermes handbags</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 08 Jul 2010 02:52:41 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Marla, 

Nice, thanks for sharing the link about the online stopwatch. Normally, I use a timer on my widget dashboard. I’m a Mac user. It gets the job done. Thanks again,

-Mig</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marla, </p>
<p>Nice, thanks for sharing the link about the online stopwatch. Normally, I use a timer on my widget dashboard. I’m a Mac user. It gets the job done. Thanks again,</p>
<p>-Mig</p>
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		<title>By: Larry</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-10358</link>
		<dc:creator>Larry</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Jul 2009 16:08:18 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Quick comment on Daneille&#039;s comment above: I disagree, you don&#039;t need to draft and re-draft.  And I do agree, you can&#039;t write an award-winning novel straight away -- I TOTALLY agree with that -- until you let your thoughts flow and write them down.  To just start drafting without knowing anything about where to take it is... well, a recipe for an extensive rewrite at best.

If I sound like I&#039;ve just contradicted myself, I don&#039;t think I have.  Because you can do that -- writing down all your thoughts and ideas about your story --  without drafting and redrafting.  You can do that by applying a thorough and creative process of OUTLINING your story first.

If you understand story structure well, and if you are aware of the criteria of the various elements that go into it, then you can evolve your story at the outline phase without doing a draft. And without remotely compromising the creative process.  Once the outline is solid, then your draft comes alive immediately, with your best thinking and all the elements in place, in the RIGHT place.  

I&#039;ve sold three first drafts to a major NY publisher doing it this way. It works.  It makes the drafting process not only more efficient, but more creative, empowering and rewarding, too.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Quick comment on Daneille&#8217;s comment above: I disagree, you don&#8217;t need to draft and re-draft.  And I do agree, you can&#8217;t write an award-winning novel straight away &#8212; I TOTALLY agree with that &#8212; until you let your thoughts flow and write them down.  To just start drafting without knowing anything about where to take it is&#8230; well, a recipe for an extensive rewrite at best.</p>
<p>If I sound like I&#8217;ve just contradicted myself, I don&#8217;t think I have.  Because you can do that &#8212; writing down all your thoughts and ideas about your story &#8212;  without drafting and redrafting.  You can do that by applying a thorough and creative process of OUTLINING your story first.</p>
<p>If you understand story structure well, and if you are aware of the criteria of the various elements that go into it, then you can evolve your story at the outline phase without doing a draft. And without remotely compromising the creative process.  Once the outline is solid, then your draft comes alive immediately, with your best thinking and all the elements in place, in the RIGHT place.  </p>
<p>I&#8217;ve sold three first drafts to a major NY publisher doing it this way. It works.  It makes the drafting process not only more efficient, but more creative, empowering and rewarding, too.</p>
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		<title>By: Danielle Ingram</title>
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		<dc:creator>Danielle Ingram</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Fri, 31 Jul 2009 08:59:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I don&#039;t think you can expect to write an award winning novel, news article or feature straight away. You need to draft and re-draft.

One thing that you touched upon that i think is really important is to let your thoughts flow and write them down. Once you have got all of your thoughts and ideas together you can then start to put together your piece of literature.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I don&#8217;t think you can expect to write an award winning novel, news article or feature straight away. You need to draft and re-draft.</p>
<p>One thing that you touched upon that i think is really important is to let your thoughts flow and write them down. Once you have got all of your thoughts and ideas together you can then start to put together your piece of literature.</p>
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		<title>By: Rebecca Laffar-Smith</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-10277</link>
		<dc:creator>Rebecca Laffar-Smith</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sun, 19 Jul 2009 11:15:38 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Fantastic guest post and it&#039;s lovely to come across a refreshingly new voice at Write To Done. :-) I&#039;m looking forward to exploring more of your ideas and writing, Marla. It&#039;s very nice to meet you.

Dealing with the side-tracking and distractions of internal mind chatter is one of the most difficult challenges I face whenever I write. I have to constantly remind myself, &quot;DRAFT&quot;. One of the fantastic things about writing is that every word we write is not final until published. The writing process is one of constant growth and change. Having put a word here does not mean it is fixed to that point, it can be cut, moved, deleted, reworded, reworked...

I suppose this too is a sense of the &quot;Swiss Cheese Draft&quot;. Knowing, accepting, even embracing the imperfections that are inevitable in the early stages of writing. Getting the words down is more important then getting them right.

The good news is that with practice we make fewer mistakes, have fewer gaps, and can write more completely the first time. Getting into the habit of writing regularly is the first step. :-)</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Fantastic guest post and it&#8217;s lovely to come across a refreshingly new voice at Write To Done. :-) I&#8217;m looking forward to exploring more of your ideas and writing, Marla. It&#8217;s very nice to meet you.</p>
<p>Dealing with the side-tracking and distractions of internal mind chatter is one of the most difficult challenges I face whenever I write. I have to constantly remind myself, &#8220;DRAFT&#8221;. One of the fantastic things about writing is that every word we write is not final until published. The writing process is one of constant growth and change. Having put a word here does not mean it is fixed to that point, it can be cut, moved, deleted, reworded, reworked&#8230;</p>
<p>I suppose this too is a sense of the &#8220;Swiss Cheese Draft&#8221;. Knowing, accepting, even embracing the imperfections that are inevitable in the early stages of writing. Getting the words down is more important then getting them right.</p>
<p>The good news is that with practice we make fewer mistakes, have fewer gaps, and can write more completely the first time. Getting into the habit of writing regularly is the first step. :-)</p>
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		<title>By: Coach Marla</title>
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		<dc:creator>Coach Marla</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 09 Jul 2009 22:04:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hello again, everyone!  

@Paul, Thanks for writing.  I call your habit of switching to a complementary (or entirely different) project when the one you&#039;re working on gets stale &quot;domain shifting,&quot; and it&#039;s a very useful skill to cultivate!  Been meaning to blog about this tool. Your post&#039;s inspired me to do so soon.

@Dave, your forehead-smacking &quot;what was I thinking&quot; mention made me laugh out loud.  So true!  Great suggestion to keep old drafts...as you say, reviewing them later can be fun and instructive, too.

@Matthew, I hadn&#039;t thought of filling the brackets with entirely unrelated thoughts that come up during writing (grocery list, etc.), but it&#039;s a *fantastic* idea, one I&#039;ll remember &amp; recommend (&amp; attribute to you).  Your technique  speaks to one of my primary &quot;Relaxed Writer&quot; messages:  that with awareness, we can boost our productivity by not buying into the &quot;Either / Or&quot; dualisms we create (art &quot;vs.&quot; craft;  writing &quot;vs.&quot; life, form &quot;vs.&quot; content, etc.) but instead, with practice, we can learn to work in both realms simultaneously, as you do when writing.  Very cool stuff.

@Larry, I agree, deliberately blueprinting story form is good practice, especially in the initial stages of learning one&#039;s craft or a new genre or form.  In the comments to your new (well-written, btw. congrats!)  WTD guest post,  you say: &quot;Craft can be learned, art must be discovered.&quot;  To discover often requires us to invest time in play, exploration or risk-taking on the page, and this &quot;Swiss Cheese draft&quot; exercise is just one of many ways to get there.

@Missm, @Marla - thanks for saying hello.  :)

@Mary, off to check out your new post at Good Life Zen.  Looking forward to it.

Great to meet you, everyone! Will check back again soon.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hello again, everyone!  </p>
<p>@Paul, Thanks for writing.  I call your habit of switching to a complementary (or entirely different) project when the one you&#8217;re working on gets stale &#8220;domain shifting,&#8221; and it&#8217;s a very useful skill to cultivate!  Been meaning to blog about this tool. Your post&#8217;s inspired me to do so soon.</p>
<p>@Dave, your forehead-smacking &#8220;what was I thinking&#8221; mention made me laugh out loud.  So true!  Great suggestion to keep old drafts&#8230;as you say, reviewing them later can be fun and instructive, too.</p>
<p>@Matthew, I hadn&#8217;t thought of filling the brackets with entirely unrelated thoughts that come up during writing (grocery list, etc.), but it&#8217;s a *fantastic* idea, one I&#8217;ll remember &amp; recommend (&amp; attribute to you).  Your technique  speaks to one of my primary &#8220;Relaxed Writer&#8221; messages:  that with awareness, we can boost our productivity by not buying into the &#8220;Either / Or&#8221; dualisms we create (art &#8220;vs.&#8221; craft;  writing &#8220;vs.&#8221; life, form &#8220;vs.&#8221; content, etc.) but instead, with practice, we can learn to work in both realms simultaneously, as you do when writing.  Very cool stuff.</p>
<p>@Larry, I agree, deliberately blueprinting story form is good practice, especially in the initial stages of learning one&#8217;s craft or a new genre or form.  In the comments to your new (well-written, btw. congrats!)  WTD guest post,  you say: &#8220;Craft can be learned, art must be discovered.&#8221;  To discover often requires us to invest time in play, exploration or risk-taking on the page, and this &#8220;Swiss Cheese draft&#8221; exercise is just one of many ways to get there.</p>
<p>@Missm, @Marla &#8211; thanks for saying hello.  :)</p>
<p>@Mary, off to check out your new post at Good Life Zen.  Looking forward to it.</p>
<p>Great to meet you, everyone! Will check back again soon.</p>
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		<title>By: Matthew Miller</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-10197</link>
		<dc:creator>Matthew Miller</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 08 Jul 2009 19:46:39 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Nice ideas, well structured.  An addition from my toolbox:  when the chatter happens, I just add a square bracket and capture the thought (works on typewritten or handwritten!).  This way the thought has been recognized and the flow of words onto paper  isn&#039;t slowed significantly.  After a couple weeks of this, I found my block moments much fewer.  [Pick up milk at the store today]  Just as an example :-). When I&#039;m done, I can do a quick search for square brackets and move those to my to-do list, notes file, or wherever is most appropriate.

Thanks!
-Matthew</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Nice ideas, well structured.  An addition from my toolbox:  when the chatter happens, I just add a square bracket and capture the thought (works on typewritten or handwritten!).  This way the thought has been recognized and the flow of words onto paper  isn&#8217;t slowed significantly.  After a couple weeks of this, I found my block moments much fewer.  [Pick up milk at the store today]  Just as an example :-). When I&#8217;m done, I can do a quick search for square brackets and move those to my to-do list, notes file, or wherever is most appropriate.</p>
<p>Thanks!<br />
-Matthew</p>
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		<title>By: Miguel &#124; SimplyBlog</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-10167</link>
		<dc:creator>Miguel &#124; SimplyBlog</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Mon, 06 Jul 2009 04:40:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Marla, 

Nice, thanks for sharing the link about the online stopwatch. Normally, I use a timer on my widget dashboard. I&#039;m a Mac user. It gets the job done. Thanks again,

-Mig</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Marla, </p>
<p>Nice, thanks for sharing the link about the online stopwatch. Normally, I use a timer on my widget dashboard. I&#8217;m a Mac user. It gets the job done. Thanks again,</p>
<p>-Mig</p>
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		<title>By: Marla Taviano</title>
		<link>http://writetodone.com/2009/06/23/first-draft-secrets-four-simple-steps/#comment-10161</link>
		<dc:creator>Marla Taviano</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Sat, 04 Jul 2009 16:29:15 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Hi, Marla! Great post!

Three things:

1. I love Swiss cheese.
2. My name is Marla.
3. Love the place card thing--I do this all the time but had never heard anyone talk about it.

Off to check out your site!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Hi, Marla! Great post!</p>
<p>Three things:</p>
<p>1. I love Swiss cheese.<br />
2. My name is Marla.<br />
3. Love the place card thing&#8211;I do this all the time but had never heard anyone talk about it.</p>
<p>Off to check out your site!</p>
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		<title>By: MissM</title>
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		<dc:creator>MissM</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 01 Jul 2009 22:55:56 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>The Swiss cheese method, though I never heard it called that before, works well for me. I have to write, let it sit, write, let it sit, then revise.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>The Swiss cheese method, though I never heard it called that before, works well for me. I have to write, let it sit, write, let it sit, then revise.</p>
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