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		<title>By: Holly Wilcox</title>
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		<dc:creator>Holly Wilcox</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 29 Apr 2009 14:31:29 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>If something is boring, it doesn&#039;t matter whether it is short or long. Does writing need to speed up to nearly real time to keep the attention of the reader?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>If something is boring, it doesn&#8217;t matter whether it is short or long. Does writing need to speed up to nearly real time to keep the attention of the reader?</p>
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		<dc:creator>Ensidia’s Holy Priest Guide and Monday Links &#124; World of Matticus</dc:creator>
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		<description>i like using the short paragraphs. it definitely helps because people don&#039;t seem to read as much as they used to. the short paragraphs are less intimidating.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>i like using the short paragraphs. it definitely helps because people don&#8217;t seem to read as much as they used to. the short paragraphs are less intimidating.</p>
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		<title>By: Twitter Today: April 23, 2009 &#124; kenneth lim . net</title>
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		<title>By: Andrew Richter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Andrew Richter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Thu, 23 Apr 2009 14:46:00 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Mary,

Thanks for your response. My money&#039;s on Strunk and White. It&#039;s the industry standard and has been for a half century. The AP Stylebook only mentions one guide outside of its bibliography -- guess which one. I teach a continuing education editing course at Rutgers, and it&#039;s what I use, and my son&#039;s tenth-grade honors English teacher is using it exclusively to teach writing.

Don&#039;t get me wrong: I&#039;m not arguing for interminable paragraphs, nor is the point to write things that don&#039;t matter. Another poster above says it&#039;s all about the reader, and it is. Single-line graphs are distracting and never allow ideas to come together.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Mary,</p>
<p>Thanks for your response. My money&#8217;s on Strunk and White. It&#8217;s the industry standard and has been for a half century. The AP Stylebook only mentions one guide outside of its bibliography &#8212; guess which one. I teach a continuing education editing course at Rutgers, and it&#8217;s what I use, and my son&#8217;s tenth-grade honors English teacher is using it exclusively to teach writing.</p>
<p>Don&#8217;t get me wrong: I&#8217;m not arguing for interminable paragraphs, nor is the point to write things that don&#8217;t matter. Another poster above says it&#8217;s all about the reader, and it is. Single-line graphs are distracting and never allow ideas to come together.</p>
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		<title>By: Kim Hillman</title>
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		<dc:creator>Kim Hillman</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 23:28:57 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Great post!  I can see a variety of uses for this information both online and off!  Especially in my field - writing booklets!  

With today&#039;s short attention spans, it makes sense to write shorter sentences, shorter paragraphs, and shorter manuscripts!</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Great post!  I can see a variety of uses for this information both online and off!  Especially in my field &#8211; writing booklets!  </p>
<p>With today&#8217;s short attention spans, it makes sense to write shorter sentences, shorter paragraphs, and shorter manuscripts!</p>
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		<title>By: Walter</title>
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		<dc:creator>Walter</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 22:58:26 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I actually teach students to write for the web... scary since I am scared to start my own blog... but I do focus on the rule I was taught in journalism was that the first 25 words sold the piece. I wonder if there is some carry over here?</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I actually teach students to write for the web&#8230; scary since I am scared to start my own blog&#8230; but I do focus on the rule I was taught in journalism was that the first 25 words sold the piece. I wonder if there is some carry over here?</p>
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		<title>By: Bamboo Forest - PunIntended</title>
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		<dc:creator>Bamboo Forest - PunIntended</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 20:54:40 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>Good stuff here Mary. I&#039;m always striving to make the pace of my writing as absolutely flowing and rapid as possible because I don&#039;t like reading wordy stuff.

In some ways I think slow pace writing is a method of insulting your readers. Be kind to them... they just want to read what matters and nothing more.

Lastly... When we write it isn&#039;t about us. It&#039;s about THE READER. Make it fast and easy for them, you&#039;re writing for others to read not yourself.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>Good stuff here Mary. I&#8217;m always striving to make the pace of my writing as absolutely flowing and rapid as possible because I don&#8217;t like reading wordy stuff.</p>
<p>In some ways I think slow pace writing is a method of insulting your readers. Be kind to them&#8230; they just want to read what matters and nothing more.</p>
<p>Lastly&#8230; When we write it isn&#8217;t about us. It&#8217;s about THE READER. Make it fast and easy for them, you&#8217;re writing for others to read not yourself.</p>
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		<title>By: Miles Cobbett</title>
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		<dc:creator>Miles Cobbett</dc:creator>
		<pubDate>Wed, 22 Apr 2009 20:48:35 +0000</pubDate>
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		<description>I liked your article, and if you believe what you wrote, then I am betting you will love reading my book Champion.

See the Rave Reader Reviews on the Barnes and Noble webpage at:

 http://tiny.cc/mmfYU 

All the best,
Miles Cobbett, Author Champion

PS By the way the writing ideas you present sound much like the  ideas presented to a 17 year old Ernest Hemingway as the Writing Guidelines from his copy editor boss when he got his first job out of High School at the Kansas City Star Newspaper.</description>
		<content:encoded><![CDATA[<p>I liked your article, and if you believe what you wrote, then I am betting you will love reading my book Champion.</p>
<p>See the Rave Reader Reviews on the Barnes and Noble webpage at:</p>
<p> <a href="http://tiny.cc/mmfYU" rel="nofollow">http://tiny.cc/mmfYU</a> </p>
<p>All the best,<br />
Miles Cobbett, Author Champion</p>
<p>PS By the way the writing ideas you present sound much like the  ideas presented to a 17 year old Ernest Hemingway as the Writing Guidelines from his copy editor boss when he got his first job out of High School at the Kansas City Star Newspaper.</p>
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